Dead Space Pongik&banana

http://i.imgur.com/kYG6f.png


http://i.imgur.com/7wose.png




Final Version :


http://i.imgur.com/IZ5fn.png

Obviously I am not as experianced as most of the people here, but this tags lighting is a little to much imo. I have a 27" LCD monitor and I actually had to squint and focus a little bit to really make out the rest of his suit. And the smoke or what surrounding him doesn't really fit, and I feel the color scheme was off with the very light blue (cyan almost I think) lighting.

I would give this tag a 6/10 its still good work and better then what I could do. And remember everything I said is my opinion and not meant to be harsh in any way.

Too bright and sharp and the flow is bummed, also lacks real depth.