Venom(feedback?)

I was watching the tutorial thread and saw the Tuts are Dumb post. This is my try at making the venom tag.

http://i.imgur.com/E6RuF.png

And a small edit I made, Laser Shooting Venom.

http://i.imgur.com/lfWjm.png

I like it. It's simple and I just like the colors on it. I feel the first one is loads better than the second one IMO.

second one was just joking... :)

can you post the original render link so i have a reference? thankss

Got it from bakarenders, the site of Slavory: source

v1 is better but there doesnt look like there is much to it tbh man it needs something to stand out in it

it looks to me like you took the render and flipped it, then added some smooth black c4ds on a black background. needs something. get some red in that sig

lol. this was in the tutorial thread. just make a background placing the render around and then place the render resized. then add a effect c4d, effects and you're done.