Timeshift: 1st tagg in weeks

I've been out of gfx for some weeks, but im tryin to get back in
this is my first tagg since my break:

http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/9...eshifttagg.png

Cnc?

Hmmm, I'm not feeling it. I think the blue and orange are too bright for such a dark sig.

i should edit the render more, blend it more. adjust it w/ brightness and contrast

Has potential.

Cool idea and use of your render. Fractals helped this along very well and added some flash to this piece.

One suggestion I would give is to better blend in the gb use of the render, don't leave so much of the render in its original form, so the circular part should better be pushed around to not show so much.

I on the other hand do like how bright your yellow is and think it pretty spot on, along with the frctals.

Your render has a light source on it tho that is not accounted for, what you do with this is add a soft black brush to it on clip mask fashion and lightly dust around so it's not so noticed. One more Idea is to lightly feather some of the areas that are touching your light sources, becuase usually something that touches a harsh light tends to vanish a bit from the eye view.

Can't wait to see more ^^

Thx for the cnc ;)

dope!feelin ur smooth style