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http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...on-d56hh1m.jpg
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i do not like those white splatters on the left. taking that off, overall it's good.
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2nd one is light years ahead of the first, but you did remove some good parts of the 1st.
First thing : Don't blend a render by just erasing the edge with a soft brush, that's a bad idea and looks cheap. Maybe try applying image and smudging with a chalky brush a low opacty.
Also, you can bring back a tiny bit of the sharpness in his forehead, but take the blur tool and SLIGHTLY (like, 5% hardness) blur the inside edges of his suit/tie, they're very sharp and lack anti aliasing.