Naruto signature

So i havent posted in a wile and i was hoping to get some cnc please help me out.
http://i1224.photobucket.com/albums/...r77/Naruto.jpg

render is a bit LQ or maybe over sharpen IMO. read more tuts.

the first one with a little more work and some effects and the text removed, would be a beautiful tag.
I kinda like the 2nd one, but i can't think of anything to say about it.

Thanks all. I think the render is jacked up because i think its off of the video game, i chose it because it had some nice flow. the one at the bottom is my signature i made a few months ago i just hadent bothered to change it, i do need help with text i never know what to do with it or what effects i should do with it, that was one of my good texts. thanks again and i hope to get more feed back.