Halo Sig. C&C please.

I dunno how I feel about it. I feel like I've lost all my style when I stopped making these a while back.

http://i.imgur.com/ieUTa.jpg

the white on the left is way too bright, and ide say the sig is a little too bright in general. the effects on the background are nice tho and the blending of the render is well done

very artsy