Newest work from Tenchido

Here you go guys...My newest work... (it's going to be in a competition so i need alot of critisim)
http://pix7.com/0605/6621w_t-pay-web.gif

Anybody????

I dont like the border. Just try a black 1px.

Also I dont like the pixel text at the bottom. I like the bg and render. Good job.

i cant read the the pixel text at the bottom at all. throw on a 1 px stroke then change its opacity. Also the bg just seems a bit plain to me. I like the theme you have there though.

i aint to keen on it personaly but good sig.

It's overall decent, but I agree with Kanji. I have no real problem with the border. Hm, perhaps you could've done more work with the fire? having blended it more, with different uses/additions of layers with incorporations of different filters? Either way, I like the sig, a lot. Nice job.

~Manuel

hmmmmm, i love you techido, but nt too sure this is a piece of art I like.

I mean, i love the colours, but maybe improve the border?

http://img108.echo.cx/img108/1654/cr...tpayweb4co.gif
Is that better?

jut looks like you resized the sig and added a 1 px border? I still think you could make taht text more readable with what i said before, anywho keep trying new things with it eh?

change the border and I the fonts .. colours look good