Carnage

Yup another thread by me, but I just want to get better because I'm working on newer things. CnC Please!

http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/...02/Carnage.jpg

Looks good. Good idea with the text, I'd pick a smaller different font though, but overall nice composition. If anything; a bit too messy for my taste.

i like this man great job

It looks good, maybe smoothen it out a little bit and make it more colorful.

Love the choice of colours but I think its lacking depth, there is also no flow to this picture, its far too chaotic and needs to be tidied up, there's nothing wrong with it being chaotic but give it some form of pattern or flow so it is more appealing to the eyes.