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First time ever using this sort of style, I could use a lot of work and some feedback would be great on how to improve, first time ever using a stock (probably didnt pick a suitable one for this) and I know theirs room for tons of improvement, so CnC.
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s...loudStrife.jpg
Its a really sweet stock dude. So much you could've done. I think you did pretty well, although I'm no good at sigs.
The stock is the background Cloud is a render that i had to blend in, if that makes any difference :)
Well if it's a style you're going for, I'm sure it's an already well established style that you can look up tuts for. No idea what you were trying to go for, but nothing blends (I'll go ahead and assume that blending was the primary object for this piece). The colors are all over the place, no flow, the effects seem out of the blue. You can make the stock work but you need to make it flow with the render first, you can't just add them both and expect them to work magically, this means resizing, erasing, moving, both the render and the stock around.
There's just so much there that's wrong, what made you think deep sea blue would blend with bright yellows? Make use of gradient maps and general color tools to balance it.
Nice piece! I like what you did with the lighting, but yeah you could have done more with the effects. Can I take a look at the render? Do you still have it? I want to see what I can do with it.
As I said this is the first time I've tried to make use of this. So yea it does have a lot of problems, thanks though for the feedback I'll take it into consideration.
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s6/Daogin/advent.png
theirs the render for you to if you want to use.
SWEET THANKS!
