there is too much going on in it man the bg doesnt fit the render and the bokeh effect takes over the whole thing man text isnt needed since its just there on the bottom
11-05-2012, 02:45 PM
Pandora
What s9.Oath said, and you could work on a LOT of things, like your borders and maybe where you place things. I think instead of the bubbles in this, you could have smudged it a lot.
Some potential.
11-05-2012, 03:17 PM
Vision922
I would have erased most of the bubbles in front of the render. Leave enough to let you know shes surrounded by them, but let her be the main focus. If your set on leaving the text, every tutorial I have read about text says its best placed from Head/Chin to low chest height, so I would atleast get it out of bottom like oath stated. The BG I am undecided on, it would look cool with a smudge effect, specially since the top of that mask has a nice effect started, but maybe even chinese lettering instead of the I think maybe floral design would of been a nicer touch. But I am noobert, just my opinion