Bring it out (updated)

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...ty-d5li2t8.png

idk why it appears less sharpened here but check my deviant account its better... http://dr3amreality.deviantart.com/#/d5li2t8

When I looked at it on here I was gunna say it looks to sharp. Until I seen what you said and looked at it on deviant i see what you were going for.

I like it, but I think you should do more color's and effects in the black area's instead of leaving so much negative space. I think it would look good with the style you have going on around her.