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That smudge work is nicely done, but the smudgeless blank above his head kinda puts the focus off
I feel that having text on one side doesn't really flow well.
Also the smudging seems to be a bit too strong, and it kind of makes the image look really beaten up.
also, the smudge makes the image hand the magic of flow, but its not really blur enough to make it fit.
but other than that, that's a wonderful signature!
Agree with Negative about the text, the smudge looks pretty good anyway, maybe the quality of the focal could be better.