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Looks good dude, but work on your contrast.
Yes, like above, work a little on contrast. A friendly tip, try making your composition size smaller, it will help with reducing all that empty space on the sides.
Looks great. I think the render is a little hard to make out though. And as said above, you should work on the contrast.
8/10
it's really messy and oversharpened. I think you could've brought more of the purple of her dress into the colour scheme