black ops 2 fan art

http://imageshack.us/a/img716/143/bo2art.png

You should work on quality, the render is too dirty. The effects arent bad but a bit too simple, and the text isnt good

this was actually a stock photo no render. what would you do to spice this up?

1. I don't like how you just use motion blur and thinks that this is perfect.
2. The text is hard to read.
3. Get a better quality image.
4. Add something to make it look unique.

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Originally Posted by NegativeSal

1. I don't like how you just use motion blur and thinks that this is perfect.
2. The text is hard to read.
3. Get a better quality image.
4. Add something to make it look unique.

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in what part of this thread do see me saying i think its perfect. if i thought it was perfect i wouldn't have posted it and asked for help with it.
thanks for your imput

I don't think the quality is too bad with this one I like how he's concealed by the smudge but it feels a bit plain as if there needs to be something else. The text really drags this piece down and distracts from the overall piece. I think if you burned the sides and intensified the lighting it would've been much better but other than that nice smudge+concept.

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Originally Posted by !!!~GHOST~!!!

in what part of this thread do see me saying i think its perfect. if i thought it was perfect i wouldn't have posted it and asked for help with it.
thanks for your imput

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Did I say you say it? o-o
Just 'cause I put "you think" does not mean that you said it.

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Originally Posted by NegativeSal

Did I say you say it? o-o
Just 'cause I put "you think" does not mean that you said it.

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Kinda implies it though to be fair.