Third smudge tag

Hey guys,

Since I'm not a smudge kind of GFX'er I thought let's give it a try.
I would love some thoughts of you guys about it, I don't know what to think.
http://i1237.photobucket.com/albums/...psf541e4e6.png

You mind sending me the render that you used? Thanks

use bigger strokes, try not fading each tail off.

Work on the flow and color scheme.

Thanks you guys for replying.