But really guys... no one ever comments on anything anymore :( If you don't comment on mine go comment on someone else's!!
Sup guys! I just finished up my first vector for this graphic design class i'm in. CNC... But really because i'm getting a grade on this on friday... so really... Also i'm doing between 5 and 8 more versions, each with different levels of detail and stuff... i'm working on just a black and white one right now. so yeah comment and critique!
Overall good, you got the basic shapes that portray lighting and overall allows the eye to tell what it is. I would say more detail to hint at the texture and just to give the eye something more to look at but you already said you are doing tjat. I would play with the background and make the colors pop a bit as well.
02-26-2013, 07:02 PM
cC.ZaMa
Looks pretty good but I feel the top black part is a bit too 'choppy', maybe redo it to make it look smoother? That's my only complaint, gl on it ^^.
02-26-2013, 07:48 PM
gr4ph1kP4ND4
thanks guys! I'm not really allowed to mess with the background, although i am adding some graphics to make it look like sound is coming out (they're like little bubbles instead of the classic sound waves which i hate...)
and yeah the top is kinda choppy. it's hard because it's padded there and the padding was lumpy but i might try to redefine that area so you can pick up on the fact that there is padding there.
02-27-2013, 07:30 PM
Pet
I dare to comment!
I like how it looks. It is nice and simple, but I would suggest you rethink the black on the underside of the band. It looks like it should be the shadow of the band lying flat against a surface, but the lack of shadows on any other part make me rethink it.
02-28-2013, 04:52 PM
gr4ph1kP4ND4
thanks nathan :)
02-28-2013, 05:21 PM
gr4ph1kP4ND4
heyyo posted some updates, check them out!!!
02-28-2013, 05:34 PM
cC.ZaMa
I love the new updates ^^ nice job
02-28-2013, 11:35 PM
Hagen
I like the bubbly one best! The textured one I think looks more complete with the addition of the dotted lines but I dont like the contrast on with the ear cups. The black/white noise or dots. I think it would without a drastic change in color from the background to the dots, like white/gray or charcoal/black. I like the diagnol lines alot though.
03-01-2013, 06:34 PM
Pet
Of your 3 updated versions, I love the first one the most. I like how you played with both fill and line styles to give both light/shadow and texture.
The second is nice. It's clean and ultra contrast, not much to say about it.
As for the third, I like the idea, and intent behind the bubbles, but in all honesty, they just remind me of every picture someone slaps some circles on and calls it a vector. Those circle styles have been over used and it drags the rest of it down.
Sorry that this all comes too late, but I have no internet at my place so I have to go out to a coffee shop and bum their net.
