the white spikes bottom center seem out of place and distracting. other then that. top man. bloody good show.
04-03-2013, 01:05 PM
Xelo
tnx for the comments guys.
ghost: I'll try that font !
85: the spikes came with the c4d, I kinda like them, so ...
XL
04-04-2013, 01:24 PM
!!!~GHOST~!!!
second one looks much better. nicely done.
04-04-2013, 02:14 PM
Kotora
Actually, good work on the lighting. The font is too plain on both versions though, I'd get rid of it altogether. Effects match the piece however they don't flow all too well.
04-04-2013, 02:43 PM
Distello
I agree with the getting rid of it altogether. Text in sigs is exceptionally difficult to pull off and it only ever really works when you use more than one font and a variety of sizes.