New here, looking for ways to improve.

Hello there,
this is some work i did for a friend. I'm looking for ways to improve, or things i would not pick up on. It's not really a signature, but this seemed like the best place.

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20...an-d619uas.jpg

Cheers,
Tim

its always harder when your working with double focals .. I would bring them closer together and add more effects along the bg ;D

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Originally Posted by bobby_digital72

its always harder when your working with double focals .. I would bring them closer together and add more effects along the bg ;D

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Hey,

I'll try that out next time, im a bit new to terms and what-not. What do you mean by "add more effects along the bg"?

Cheers,
Tim

Hello there.

I think he means that your background is too blank. You have the smudging, sure, but other then that nothing really pops. i.e. Fractles, C4D's, Wireframes, things like that. It will really help to blend the image.