IronMan Tag

So this would've been for the SOTW but I never got around to finishing it... Please give me some feedback?
Thanks!

http://i.imgur.com/uI02FqC.png

Pika choooooo!



Also, pretty sexy, not fond of the text. But still sexy.

First thing that strikes me is your text. For a steampunkish render, the text could have been more dynamic. The plain, black text really kills your flow, just overall not a good choice as far as that goes.

To me, it seems that your lighting is wrong. From what I can tell, it seems to be coming from the right side of the Iron(ish) guy. Instead of darkening the area, like it seems to be, you might have using a soft brush and brushed some white/ orange in there.

It might have benefited the "flow" of this tag, if you had used some C4D's which were flowing in a North-east direction.

I do, like your choice of render very much, and it seems as if you were headed in the right direction :)

Hope this was good CnC

Colors are a bit wild man, and your effects are really dull so they look shitty.