Iron Man

http://i.imgur.com/8xwo87V.jpg

CnC please

looks a bit over sharpened. c4d flows nice around the render. might want to ease up on the brightness just a hair.

great idea ..but what sticks out the most is the depth ..the background is over blurred and the focal is over sharpened ..try and find a balance ..unless thats what you were going for ..then by all means rock it :listening_headphone

I made another version :)

http://i.imgur.com/rwKjF2B.jpg

its over sharpened and too dark, the text is also pretty hard to see and in some parts it looks over contrasted. I like the colour scheme though and the flow is nice