Assassin

So, this is my first attempt at a sig after about 2 or 3 years hiatus. CnC is appreciated. It's not the best but it's something, I guess.
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...tt-d649g3c.png
I think I over did the sharpening.

well, the render is standing out very sharply against the bg.
in other words it looks just slapt on.
text is not working as it is placed now.
leave it out or place it somewhere else; and straight; the angle doesn't do good.
the sig is blue / gray, with just one piece of red.
that is a bit strange. work on your colors
I like the flow that you created in the bg.
but the render looks like he doesn't belong there...

XL

Thanks for the feedback