Made this late last night. Spend a lot of time on the text and I still hate it. Fuck text!
http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/y...ps225c5217.png
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Made this late last night. Spend a lot of time on the text and I still hate it. Fuck text!
http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/y...ps225c5217.png
It lacks depth imo.
you need to work on space in the Z-direction.
The render suggest floating in space.
Space is 3D. your tag looks 2D.
XL
Interesting comment. Depth is usually one my strong points and even though I tried a few things out I don't think I changed that much regarding depth. Frankly I don't see it, but there must be something to make you say that so I'll keep it in mind.
Smaller cropped version:
http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/y...ps686cd552.png
I disagree with xelo, there def is depth there without a doubt, you need more of a darker atmosphere and your light source doesnt quite fit, use a c4d as a light source next time.
Old school c4d work nice I like it.
