You my friend are a victim of a smudge case

http://i40.tinypic.com/6s71jl.png

I used to love doing these types of tags. The smudging has given I great flow and you have done well to use it with the render to give it depth. What would be cool is some light lines (like what you get with flare) on either the gun or sword. Nice work good tag this.

That is phenomenal. I think if you could find a way to implement an extra colour into this it would be even better. But my opinion isn't much to go on. Keep 'em coming!

i think the flow is way too simple, going only in one direction; kinda makes the tag boring. i'm also not digging the soft brushing you did by his head, makes it look really dull and flat.

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Originally Posted by BonesMa

I used to love doing these types of tags. The smudging has given I great flow and you have done well to use it with the render to give it depth. What would be cool is some light lines (like what you get with flare) on either the gun or sword. Nice work good tag this.

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i agree with this ^^^