Roman Pearce

Menth style tag
http://i40.tinypic.com/2aietfs.png

Not bad, I like the effects on the C4D. Any chance I can get them? Also there's too much negative space, try and use the black to add more depth to it, also don't forget your lighting on the render it could be better.

bump

effects overkill..
too much; sometimes less is more!

edit:
advice:
when done with your tag... make all layers invisible.
then make m visible one by one or start swapping one by one..

then see what is best working for your tag...

edit 2:

it misses .. I dunno something smexy.. tis a nice tag but..

have a look at c4pro's work.. you are close to that..!


XL

nice flow bro just work on your lighting!

thanks razer and yh xelo i am nothing like cs4pro :L

contrast hurts a little, some depth would be ok too, nice tag tho.