Second attempt at a Signature

http://i.imgur.com/052r6fq.png

Any thoughts or Critiques?

I tried to add a little more to her shoulders and do some Color Dodge and Linear Dodge but it just ended up
whiting everything out.

As seen here:
http://i.imgur.com/jJcAROE.png

cute.. it seems that you very much like that character hehe...

LOL its my character so I can take all of the renders of it I want in game. I really should start just making fictional ones. >.<

Haha you are definatly focusing on that character. Now I do like the 2nd one better... I see where you are coming from by "whiting it out" and you should work on bringing the color back

However, I see that when you blended his/her torso you kinda left the head alone. You should try and blend the head as well, perhaps with a couple overplayed or dodged C4Ds and a bit of smudging

Yeah I was trying to make her face the focal point. I'll try it out ^.^.