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Ummm I see what you're trying to do, I think.
I suggest making another one with the same style, but use the renders carefully make sure there's a good amount of action.
For instance, the notable I'm about to turn super saiyan. Start off from left or right. Have a normal render of not super saiyan, then middle is the one where it turns super saiyan, finally the other side would be turned into super saiyan just standing or w/e.
Another better one would be like a OH MAH DEER LORD JESUS REACTION. Like the character is sitting down and in the middle it has an OH MAH DEER LORD JESUS FACE kinda like vegeta when he saw goku's power level.
hope that makes sense 2lazy to clarify
I really like this, maybe tone down the brightness on the center one though.