Getting plenty of inspiration from a lot of people's work around here.
I feel like I've butchered some of the lighting a bit (esp. around the glowing areas).
Trying new things is fun.
10-14-2013, 08:05 PM
Meddek
I like the lighting except that top left one it seems a little too large or bright not really sure but it takes away from that part of the sig.
10-14-2013, 08:35 PM
The Izaya
Edit post with lighting adjustments removed. Some people in another forum note that the render may be hard to point out.
10-14-2013, 08:45 PM
Meddek
Yeah that much lighting there was taking away from it. It still looks super bright you might try getting rid of that one entirely or just making that one super dull compaired to the others. It took me a while to realize that could be a face there.
10-17-2013, 02:17 AM
edwinpabito
the color, the lighting and the details are good. I think what the problem here are: the flow and the depth. You can't just go blurring around things, especially when it doesn't blend with the overall depth of the sig. Same for the flow, the lighting is somewhat horizontal while the snow thing or the effects thing are vertical.