[Anime] Saya Kisaragi

http://i738.photobucket.com/albums/x...psd6ca58bf.png

Trying to work on lighting and c4d placement. I think the one in front of her arm might be too big. I dont know.

http://i738.photobucket.com/albums/x...ps8906fb0c.png

So I went ahead and shrunk the c4d a bit. I think it looks better now.

http://i738.photobucket.com/albums/x...psc046bed2.png

Re-applied sharpen.

http://i738.photobucket.com/albums/x...ps60a1ff4b.png
Someone on another forum noted that they didn't like the c4d placed in fron of her. I moved it down a little.

http://i738.photobucket.com/albums/x...psc6cf1050.png
Softened up the light sources to (hopefully) make them a bit more realistic.

I really like the one with the smaller c4d and the sharpen looks great. Super cute for halloween.

Thanks. Different monitors see the signature's lighting differently (like a computer at college saw some dark areas as darker than what I see on my laptop). I'm afraid of this :P

I hadn't really thought of Halloween as much as I did last year. But the signature does have a Halloween feel to it.

Yeah it almost looks spooky like that C4D is scaring her or something.

If you're going to slap that C4D in there, you should give it more light. It seems like your source is on top of your render so you should have light refracing off that - what looks like - metallic or slick render.

Otherwise, I really like how you brought your piece to focus.

Keep it up, I'm amped to see the end product

Don't like the soft brush over her head too much
Do something with the end of her hair as well