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Ok, so I just got done with my newest render fom Cinema 4D and I am thinking it is pretty good. All comments are appreciated, and sorry for the size. Its gonna be a wallpaper.
http://pix7.com/0705/7270n_wallpaper-abstract-1.jpg
And I will prboboly end up canging the colors to a light blue maybe. Or a yellow. Yea, yellow would be cool. Comments on that too would be nice.
Beautiful, I don't know much about C4D or the 3d rendering likes (except the basics in what it does). But in my eyes that's pretty nice! Maybe smooth out some of the out-pours/'lashings' coming out of the structure, some look a bit polygonal.Quote:
Originally posted by pbguy434@Jul 5 2005, 03:41 PM
Ok, so I just got done with my newest render fom Cinema 4D and I am thinking it is pretty good.* All comments are appreciated, and sorry for the size.* Its gonna be a wallpaper.
http://pix7.com/0705/7270n_wallpaper-abstract-1.jpg
And I will prboboly end up canging the colors to a light blue maybe.* Or a yellow.* Yea, yellow would be cool.* Comments on that too would be nice.
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As for the color, I'm satisfied with the red you have there; maybe a bit too dark.
Although seeing a blue version or yellow version would be cool B)
Thanks for commenting.
I will check out on smoothing iit all out. I noticed that is seemed a little too sharp in some places, too. I didn't know if it was just me though.
Thanks again!
The shape is great, thats going to make a nice wallpaper if you do it right...The colors nice but the lighting is all wrong, try putting some lights in, then it will brighten up some places and shade others.
I have a light on the top left and another on the bottom right. The more I look at it the more I am not a fan of the glow, or atleast make the glow smaller.
Thanks for the comment on the shape, too.
i like it i see some little red pieces on the outer edges of the render but i think it came out good
Not that great. Looks like a tube with a couple matrix extrudes. Doesn't have a nice defined shape or anything. Also very unsmooth. Try adding another Hyper-nurbs.
And that is exactly what I was going to do. I can't right now because I am on a mission to fix my computer, and then I will be on a mission get get time where I am not doing anything that slows down my computer so I can render all of that.
Wasn't meant to have a very defined shape, rather to be more smooth and flowing. Which I am assuming that adding another hypernurbs to it will make it all nice and pretty.
or increasing hyperburbs power :rolleyes:
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Originally posted by deep blue@Jul 6 2005, 12:24 PM
or increasing hyperburbs power :rolleyes:
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