Wings

aight i posted this on my new devart as well ricky-day.deviantart.com

http://xs37.xs.to/pics/05285/wings2.jpg
tell me what ya think

Cool, the only flaw I see is the text - a bit pixelish.

I think it would be better if you turned him a few degrees to the left, so to center his face (nose) between the yellow strips to better balance the composition.

I think the character needs some more pizazz, maybe a color change? See what white would look like on him, and tone down the yellow strips to the point where it isn't so distracting (distracting to me, at least).

GJ! :)

oo i just noticed the color it looked white in photoshop... well whateva ill fix it lol

its nice, not too original, apart from the fact that the wing are abstract, which is cool, its well pulled off, not sure about colors and text (font) but the only main flaw i can see is on the second enlarge, his finger on the left annoys me, it overlaps and looks wierd

good job tho :)

aight color update but ill work on the finger and see what i can do db

just move im over a few pixels, which will also sort psys nose not in middle of line flaw :mellow:

The font kills the image, hardcore. Also to me, the figure in the middle doesnt look realistic enough - theres some curves that don't make sense to me.

well soz bout that ill try to fix it but i just wanted to tryan idea im workin on another peice atm so ill fix this when i can

try tnr on 85-70% height and small caps

:D

i like it
but the text has to be changed its too pixly

and the colors kinda suck

other wise its great