Away

I wrote this a few years ago.. its still one of my favorites though


You use me, then lose me
Make sure you scar 'n' bruise me
Say things that confuse me
Act like you will choose me
But you wont...
Why?
What does she have that I dont?
Try... and just maybe you will buy
But you dont and I'll cry
Then the tears subside
And I'll FLY...
Far away from all this pain
Where the sun will stop the rain
You're a million miles away
And this is where I'll stay...
Away...

That's awesome, im guessing a heartbreak was your motive?

i just LOVE the ending, its pretty

Your a really good poet, you know that?

Yeah well a heartbreak was kinda my motive.... a guy that I wanted a relationship with chose another girl over me *sniffle* LoL


Thank you Katgirl... and well, no I didnt know that, and Im sure alot of people would disagree with you... I dont consider myself good... I just write from my soul thats all you can do ya know? Just come with the realness =)


Thanks again guys =)

fook me you are n awesome poet, you have an awesome attitude and you like graphics.... marry me :lol: good poem too it hit me right in the heart

LoL deadloader. Trust me, if you knew me you wouldnt wanna marry me LoL. Thank you for all of your compliments though *blushes* Im glad everyone so far likes my work.

hahahaha pssshtt :lol: people are people you can't change how god wanted you so you're ok in my books :P oh btw could you rate my poem i want to know what someone as good as you think of mine.. don't be nice i know it's rubbish
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