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Blinding Lights and Fading Faces
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A screaching hault,
A twisted mind,
A deafening smash,
A Standstill in time.
The driver was wasted,
his meanings were blight.
This place we call home,
so long and goodnight.
C & C welcome
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thats really good
im guessing its about someone dieing in an car accident because a guy was driving drunk
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Thats really deep and meaningful... i like how its short but you definatly got your point across. I too am guessing its about a drunk driver.
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yup, that was my inspiration for it, dunno why but it just kinda pooped into my mind
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I dont like this part. The driver was wasted.
Change the wording. It'll be golden then.