i like it alot - i think the black space on the right is perfect
just one thing i dont really like - the scan lines on knuckles face and body. i would either take em out or make em lighter on his body
overall great work!
Printable View
i like it alot - i think the black space on the right is perfect
just one thing i dont really like - the scan lines on knuckles face and body. i would either take em out or make em lighter on his body
overall great work!
I do like the main layout of sorts, however, if it's a gun that Shadow is holding I would either resize him so that it is more-visible, or prop it over the edge and out of the frame (transparent gif) so that its more dominant. I agree to the comment of the text covering the render though, I would have blurred the edge of black at the very least, and not made the cut off so abrupt.
Otherwise, your concept, general organization and use of null space is excellent, and your shy border makes the scene appear to be free instead of confined to a confining frame. B)
its perty cool, a little to dark for me, but it almost works because of how you did it, if that made ANY sense, good job mate.
Actually that isn't part of the bg, I made that using another layer and matching the colors I had used on the bg, and then used radial gradient, then I made the layer's opacity lower.Quote:
Originally posted by Bit@21 Minutes Ago
I do like the main layout of sorts, however, if it's a gun that Shadow is holding I would either resize him so that it is more-visible, or prop it over the edge and out of the frame (transparent gif) so that its more dominant.* I agree to the comment of the text covering the render though, I would have blurred the edge of black at the very least, and not made the cut off so abrupt.
Otherwise, your concept, general organization and use of null space is excellent, and your shy border makes the scene appear to be free instead of confined to a confining frame.* B)
[snapback]111133[/snapback]
Here's what it looks like without it. And lower opacity on the scan lines.
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/5...lsonic36yx.jpg
I can't make the gun come off for I don't have that render anymore for the render site that I got it off of is shutdown.
Thanks guys for the the replies!
