Heart of the Beast

Tech is too blurry, like the text colouring effects, maybe a render should be put on top that will make it much better. Something organic you need.

oh, another thought, just occured, maybe make a fractal to overlay on top of it. a nice round and 'bursty' (for lack of a better word, or a word for that matter) looking one maybe.

I'll keep that in mind. Seems like it might work out. Where do you think I should place the fractal?

I'll work on it tomorrow. For now, I'll be going to sleep.

Nice...I would use it as a background if it was the right size (and if my computer can handle it :lol:)
And I like the tech thingy on the left...

~Nice job!

Updated

I took out the heavy tech effects and the blurryness of them. I also lowered the opacity on them by 10 %. To fill up most of the empty space, I brushed over the piece and used radial blur.

Please comment on the update.

WOW! Looks much better...! :)
I resized it and used it as my background image...I like it a lot!

Thx man. I'm glad you're using it as a bg.
My next plan is to make maso a gift for helping me out lol.

definatley better than the original and the other one

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Originally posted by HostilePenguin@3 Hours Ago
Thx man. I'm glad you're using it as a bg.
My next plan is to make maso a gift for helping me out lol.

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thanks buddy =D

some more suggetions though, i dont know if you are done yet or not.

- maybe move the 'mirror' of the main focus, or lower the opac
- i still a fractal would go well over the very top/center of it, if done right. a very low opac, maybe even set it on soft light or screen. and a nice kinda soft/spikey render, if that makes sense.
- maybe lower opac of the brushing on top of the main render.

the new one is DEF an improvement, i like it a lot. a very good job.

wow nice piece! yea alittle too techy, and the text... argg..dont really like it - try to fix that- other than that i like it - love all the colors!