Rabieshund raised a few good points which I agree with, but also in my opinion most space art is now all the same the nebula cloud seems overdone in most pieces, like everyone is using the exact same thing. The planets don't look too bad but they do not have enough texture, a bit of work on them and it'll look a bit better and alter the nebula colours as rabieshund said, they are way too monotone. Keep trying, you'll get it.
12-16-2005, 08:05 AM
Roy
I agree with Catalyst, the planets don't have enough texture.
Rabie - It is called Spin in the Engrish version. (Yes I put Engrish on purpose.)
Try maybe making the Nebula a bit more simple, it looks too...out there for this piece.
Nice job man, I'm seeing a lot of improvement from you.
12-16-2005, 01:26 PM
Moshiur
Thx for all the comments guys. I really appreciate it. I'll take all the tips into consideration.
12-16-2005, 02:13 PM
Wouwousoft
I like how the orange thingy bursts light ( :huh: ) ... The lightning on the planets is in the good direction (?)...
Planets need more texture (as said before)
Great one!
12-16-2005, 08:29 PM
ZeKayeM
ur planets seem a little flat, when i did mine the easiest way i found to make the planet have depth was to spherize it... but!
if u do it to a regular size planet it will distort it. so... make each planet as large as possible , ie. 3000*3000 or something so u get as much detail as possible. Select it and spherize a few times then , maybe 2 or 3... then shrink ur planet down to desired size and u wont lose as much quality.