Ok Here it is:
http://www.k12.hi.us/~kadac448/solidsnake4.jpg
or
http://www.k12.hi.us/~kadac448/solidsnake5.jpg
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it's getting better, a little more depth to it (cause it's darker around the render). I like the first one more, the second one's render is distorted too much. Try sharpening the render too.