ahhhh much better! :D I can see it all now. I like everything about it except one thing. Like HostilePenguin said, the black lines are great, but i think there are a few too many...it makes it appear as if you've tried too hard to make it glow. Personally I'd love to see the coils on a pure black background. but maybe you've already tried that! :D you know best! swell job, keep em coming.