Ironman

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4444/test2jl2.png

More ACTION!: Also not use of pen tool XD
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/3015/test12uq2.png

Welll to get rid of the illusion of just going right into black, I made it smaller :P.

Also thought the text would look better on overlay on this one. I was trying a few other styles of text but man I don't like them on this.

I'm thinking of giving his right eye a sparkle or something, not sure though :P.

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Originally Posted by Henry

Sorry for not goin into it more. The smudging is really soft, and there is no real flow to it. Also i think the black in the back is really overpowering. It's just overall very messy looking.

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^ same opinion

The new version is alot better, the text, also much much better.
But the smudging is still a little random imo.

i find v2 the most appealling