The lightened text in the middle kind of throws off the render, and the pixelated text to the left doesn't look like it belongs. Reduce some of the grungish-looking brushing, and try something more fluid, maybe experiment with some freeflow fractals, and some earthy, vibrant colors. Create a fractal that's flowy, maybe somewhat curvy, and have it curl up on both sides of the render, and possibly use a Gaussian Blur on Lighten to give it somewhat of a Glow. Try making it less wide also, that'll show some spotlight to the render.
Good luck, buddy.
07-28-2007, 05:37 PM
Goop
ill tell you why its not professional. . . the background doesnt match the render at all... too much text which makes it look like a second focal point? yea and the text is bad too, no flow, its just all wild everywhere, and a horrible light source.
