OKey... :D
The Happiest poster will write now :D :D
I like v3 mostly ;)
I like THAT bg, I cant see it very clearly, but it gives some
energy :D
Then... I like the girl :D <3 but for that wide Sig its too small
IN MY OPINION :p (!everyone says his opinion, right? :D)
Next.,..,., Text.. I see it but you can hire the opacity, becouse I
had to search it for some time... :D
I really like your works, :) and dunno where I can say some bad words about you and your works ;) ;)
Yes, and you need to tut this ;) :D :)
And Am I need to tut my smilies(Thread called "Garis's smilies world")? :D :)
And sorry for my English, once again... :D :) I am not so good like you... :p :D
My first in a while.
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11-05-2007, 01:42 PMGaris
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11-05-2007, 03:34 PMPapa
V3 awesome text. I like the bg and i like how you put letters and text mixed in with the effects. Nice job overall. I like some of your other sigs better, just because they are more interesting, but definetly not bad.
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11-05-2007, 04:37 PMDevon
v3 bro...The sig is really nice...
It could use some kickass font imo...
I can't really find any mistakes...
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11-05-2007, 10:48 PMLordemir
it must be nice to be in a position where you can just create an amazing piece of work in such a small amount of time :D
v1 is the best, though i don't see the point of v2 (i couldn't find the difference betweens the text's mainly b/c i couldn't find it in the first one)
i would say more about them but i would just end up sounding redundant
btw a tut on this would be awesome; i would love to pick up on some new techniques to making better sigs -
11-05-2007, 11:43 PMFreakUsing C4D and splatter brushes is not a new style...Quote:
Originally Posted by Daemon
It doesn't flow.
The lighting is way off.
The head is floating there.
The text doesn't fit.
These are the most obvious things I saw when looking at this piece. Try to make your tags look realistic as it relates to depth, lighting and composition. After you have that down, just work on making interesting effects to compliment the mood of the stock. -
11-06-2007, 09:09 AMDaemonIm not sure you got what i meant. a new style for me.Quote:
Originally Posted by Freak
Beside text doesnt fit im not quite on what you mean i agree with you if you mean on version 2. but in version 1 it blends quit into the bg. And just for the record this isnt just splatter and c4d's :)
-About the floating head i can see what you mean and i could proberly af done that better thx for pointing it out;)
But please explain why the light is off?
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11-06-2007, 10:23 AMJeff
yeah, freak nailed it. the light source you made at the top doesn't match the lighting on the girl very well. and the two at the bottom have no effect on the girl either, so it looks unrealistic. some parts of the head look like they've been half erased, mainly the left side, and it looks weird there. i think the splatters stand out a bit too much as well.
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11-06-2007, 03:42 PMDaemonOkay thx for pointing it out:) and as i see the splatter does stand out a bit to strong.Quote:
Originally Posted by Jeff
