first try using this style

i like the flow of it, nice style... i like the c4d's lol

lovin it m8
looks sweet as! :D
tbh i'm far 2 much of a gfx noob to give any cronstructive criticism hehe

Well then what you did right now was VERY GOOD!

as I said before, rather post and say if you like or dislike the sig/avvy/LP/whatever than not posting at all