Lol I know, just bored thats all :P
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Lol I know, just bored thats all :P
dude ur good, bvut that first one......kinda weird.
WTF @ first one.....may i ask what that's about?
not really a poet, i like more thinking up stories, writing reviews, or on a topic i choose. i do write for another site, btw.
well here's one of my short little poem titled angel :P
If an angel is someone who's so filled with love
Is a gift that thy constantly share
If an angel is someone who looks out for others
And gives them a nudge here and there
If an angel is someone who touches your life
With a heart thats both full of joy and wise
Then even though you don't have a halo with wings
Your an angel in human disguise
Not as nice as narco's ones
Its knda self explanitory.. rape..Quote:
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dude ur good, bvut that first one......kinda weird.
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Mortal Coil
We are immortal, an unstopable force,
Summoned by our maker, Powerless to inervene.
Hard to be indifferent. Focus on a mission.
Are we falling?
Wrapped up in a mortal coil.
We never know until we go, only doing as were told.
A spell of good to save a few, and work as their clean up crew.
Are we falling?
Wrapped up in a mortal coil.
Close the the beast, passing through the walls.
Close to the scene, Immortals shall meet.
Dividing the spoils, with hearst of gold.
Black in your soul, and pass over you, picked from you.
How can you seperate the fear?
How can you not want vengance?
When you cant wipe the tears they've caused.
Farewell to the flesh, Trumpets sound in triumph.
The gates are gold as promised.
Are we faling? Wrapped up in a mortal coil: Oh, we must fly, not me to break free. Bring me. (To the gates)
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Bleeding
Slice away the streams of fear, face the trauma.
The black becomes clear, feel the blare become inner peace.
Blood shall flow like pressure released.
Cracked emotions.
I'm bleeding, I'm bleeding.
Problems decased.
I'm bleeding, I'm bleeding.
Carved my wrist but missed the vein.
Way to swallow, as my problems still remain.
My temple I shall desecrate.
Cant face the future, my paste has become my fate.
You brought me flowers, it was more than I gave you.
Your cold dead eyes shed a tear.
More emotion in a second than you've shown me in a lifetime.
You said you will miss me, then bent down and kissed me.
As the warmpth passed from your lips, my body lies.
A tear falls to the ground as I watch im apathy..
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Hate Love
Love solves it all
Love fixes everything
Love solves all... but hate
Isnt it funny what hate can do
When love steps out on you
She once had love but now its gone
Love screws it all
Love screws up everything
Love screws it all
Love screws up everything... but hate
Love screws it all
Aint love grand?
Poems:
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Girl..
Take this knife girl,
You know what to do,
Cut with it,
Slice with it,
Make yourself new.
Cut your wrist open,
Let the blood drain out,
Hang from something sturdy,
Hope your mom can get the stain out.
Your death will be cheery,
A good joke for late night,
Head lines will say,
She Had no Will to Fight.
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Just Whisper.
Just whisper in my ear,
The pain felt inside,
Blood and torture you commit,
Shows with every stride.
Now running after nothing,
Trying not to trip,
Might as well just give up now,
Cause your life is full of shit.
Just whisper in my ear,
The joy felt inside,
When you gave up lost hope,
For what ever was inside.
Good luck to your torture,
Good luck to your pain,
Now it is probably over,
So give up all your shame.
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Links to More Poems...
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18375392/ (You Did It.)
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18335893/ (What is)
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/16842792/ (Ending)
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Wow nice, finaly someone else posted and it was worth every second I took to read it :)
they are good..but the first one is kinda weird. Cause i mean a 15 year old(or however old you are)) kid writing a poem about rape and its pretty explicit is kinda odd.. but its actually really well writin. You got some great stuff..i wrote a prayer once but i lost it ima try to find it
