It looks good, and you can tell alot of work into it like most of your sigs. But it just doesn't appeal to me. The overall image lacks focus and it's tough to really look at it. A signature isn't exactly the best place to display a portrait, mostly the style you do.
I think you should really focus your talent on larger pieces and expand out of the small canvas sizes.
09-15-2005, 06:28 AM
Bram
that ownz very cool & orginal!
09-15-2005, 07:47 AM
Wiseson
with the changes it looks much better imo, excellent work. :)
09-15-2005, 11:41 AM
Tredici
Much appreciated Bram and Backlash :).
Thanks alot for that Zeek, I really do understand what you're saying. But strangely, I believe what you have commented on is a positive quality of a sig. I love spending more than just a second or two staring at sigs. I try to capture a general focal point, in this case, the zombie on the left, and then have several sub-focal points to hold attention of the viewer, e.g. my name on the tombstone, the windows, the fist breaking through the soil, the bats, the haunted butler at the entrance and the ghost which can only be seen once light pierces it. This way, people continue to stare at the sig, just trying to make sure they've seen and noticed everything about it.
Admittedly, I have brought this style to a larger canvas, but don't believe it's all quite ready for public viewing. Thanks for the interest guys. Tredici.