Hmm this tag is nice to look at but it has to much going on for me :S its flow is nice and so are the effects especially the lines and X's you should move the render to the left more so it is more central and blend her abit more
The only crit's i have is that it looks like you have done a nice job around her and then gone for the rest of the tag in the BG is stick a clipping mask there :S you should either make her bigger and more central or crop the tag.
overall solid tag but could be better :S