Plane jump

edit any better?

I prefer the edit alot more. Much more improved, liking the c4d placement on the guy, adding to the flames and freefall momentum. Good job.

Better, but I still feel like it's lacking momentum. After all, he is falling down from the plane, but the wind lines are going left for some reason. The flames dont really look like they need to be there, out of place if you must. They might look better as like smoke rising off of him or something. Just my two cents

Nice work like v1 the best. The sun setting them looks nice.

v2, nice touch.