V1. V2 is okay but that thick earth looking font isn't helping this at all. rly needs work. The smudging is great. great job blending him in> i just wish there was a tad bit more.
I'm not kidding if you are into smudging great! but you MUST check out naito's work from planetrenders. His work will give you a whole different idea on how to approach a smudge sig + add flow.
He's got amazing Use of smugding, and i'm not saying this to you because you smudging isn't good, cause it's not your smudgign is great, some of the best i've seen around ehre in awhile. But you should get a feel for how other artists are adding flow.
Overall just neeeds more flow.
03-25-2009, 10:28 AM
Fuzer
thanks, ill be sure to check him out, im always looking for ways to improve, but i havent been back in the game for long, kinda feels like im back at square one >.< and as for the font, yeah, i liked v1 better, i didnt want to do text really, it ruined it..
