Cityscape shirt.

i can imagine that
for some reason im thinking of the girl form big mommas house 2

anyway. just on its own like that it looked a little off. try putting into context.

Here is the same design with it in a flat blue color.

http://www.nathanaenns.com/art/city-shirt2.png

PS: I have already had a lot of people want me to make this shirt, and I almost want to make it for myself. [plaid version] :D

I think the biggest problem I have isn't with the plaid but with the black shirt. Experiment with different shirt colours.

try bright colors :D

try a really light pink, or a light blue :D
haha might work. I love how it looks, just experiment with different colours until you find the perfect one :D and how did you get those t-shirt templates? did you make them or are they available blank somewhere? if so can you please link because it will help out when im designing a shirt for my graphics porject in school :D

Nice piece, though a gradient would be much more preferable than tartan, as the others said.

But whatever suits you. :)

I Like it pet, its just like the tartan is a bit to much. I would like to see one with a plain blue colour on a black t-shirt, cuz the design looks good. Or a multicolored one with some pink and yellow in it xD good work pet

Instead of having the plaid go vertical/horizontal, maybe try rotating it 45 degrees, so that its diagonal.

Looks nicer with the flat colour IMO but thats just me.