Rukia

Stop arguing now, I'm sure it's all just one big mis-understanding. The mouth has been re-worked well, I couldn't have done that but I'm bad at GFXing. :P Good job.

This mouth is noticeably edited. Try to smooth it out a bit more, its still a little blurry and jagged.

You all just need to calm down. Good work, keep it up.

V2 ADDED **note** thanks for the feedback all i tried to use you're tips & hints.. CnC plz:)

Still a bit jagged around the edges and on the teeth.

The lighting and effects are much much better. Good work!

THanks samuel, but what do you exactly mean with "jagged"? and how do you think i could fix that?

I'm not being rude, but I'll give it to you straight : I suggest reading some tuts and doing something better overall, especially if you don't want such bad CnC.

I look at it this way : Why is she ON a sig, if you only want CnC for her face? Why didn't you just edit the render? Plopping something you want help with onto an ugly background that took you 10 seconds to make is just going to make your work on her face look uglier.

Now, onto what you want CnCed... I'm not sure if you're wondering about recoloring on her face, or wether or not you even did that, so I'll just say I wouldn't bother even mentioning recoloring... it tends to be a byproduct of sig making, very little renders end up their original colors in the final product.

And finally the mouth.. Well, it's not TERRIBLE, to be honest I couldn't probably do any better, considering I have no idea how to draw Anime. :P That being said, I'm sure you could have got a result 1000x better if you just cut a smile from some other typical Anime chick and plopped it onto her, and made the skin colors the same. The mouth you have in now looks a little like an awkward smile, and her facial structure overall doesn't say "smiling", so I think it looks a bit weird. That's why it's hard to just edit in a different mouth and keep the original facial expression.

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Originally Posted by theclan10

THanks samuel, but what do you exactly mean with "jagged"? and how do you think i could fix that?

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Jagged probably means that it doesn't look smooth. Pixely maybe. Not smooth meaning sort of like the shape of the letter "w". Just many times over.
So it'll be like "wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww", k that's jagged. Or something like that anyway.

How to fix this... Hmm... Perhaps, try smudging? Or gausian blurring a dupe of the mouth and placing it behind the original.

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Originally Posted by _.Pac-man._

No offence but this is a bad sig
Not feeling the sig and the lighting is done badly
Text is oky. Read sum tut, it will certainly help u

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Next time could you please make the comment a little more positive, he could have done without the first bit of your post, however the second part was actually constructive. Don't sugarcoat, but you could just list some improvements. Thanks. :D