I think the text is much better now, it's easier to see, and much smoother.
The effects are still not hitting the right note with me, try and change some of the colours to some deep orange and yellows.
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I think the text is much better now, it's easier to see, and much smoother.
The effects are still not hitting the right note with me, try and change some of the colours to some deep orange and yellows.
