Fly 'BELOW'

I love the color, and the whole piece overall. Although that one C4D right behind the girls head, the gold one, seems to stick out pretty badly. It seems odd I guess because nothing else in the piece looks as 3D as that does.

ah, thanks for the tip, but i kinda like it, though i think its poorly blended,lol
thanks for the comment :D

Edited with lower blur and a little change, how is it now?

Personally im not feeling the blur at all, in my opinion pieces like this need no blur or sharpen at all. Apart from that, i love the text fits well, but i think that the girl should have been left the normal colour (her skin and stuff) but thats just my two cents.

I like the concept, and the overall composition. There are a few areas I think you could work on though:

1. The stock you used is a little low quality on the edges. Like near the feet, the cut is a little jagged, and I guess you tried to hide it by blurring, but that makes the most important features less noticeable, and kind of dampens the image. I love seeing sharp and evenly contrasted stocks being used because it shows your mastery of the technique.

2. The colors seem a bit too abrupt for me. I think a little use of restraint on the number of hues used might have done some good for this piece. Not so much purple to green, but a focused distribution. A matching palette would make this a much better LP.

Overall nice job. I like the feeling you put across, and I like the mood of the piece. Gj

now i doont have any words to say lol

ok tbh, the stock is a little lq and yeah i tried to hide it using blurs.
and ur second point is absolutely right tooo, i used random brushing there just to change the mood of thepiece.

Thanks for the advanced critique both of you. thats what i was looking forward to.
Happy now.

Well i think it looks just great!

Good job! :D